Comments on: a poem i wrote about love and loss… what do you think? http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php Sat, 21 Aug 2010 16:54:49 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: Duisend-poot http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php/comment-page-1#comment-2838 Duisend-poot Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:01:35 +0000 http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php#comment-2838 This has sent shivers down my spine. I can honestly say that it has brought tears to my eyes. I believe in telling my hubby and kids that i love them everyday and will continue doing so after reading this poem. If you have lost someone then i am so sorry and hope that your wounds and pain will heal and that you may find happiness again.:) This has sent shivers down my spine. I can honestly say that it has brought tears to my eyes.
I believe in telling my hubby and kids that i love them everyday and will continue doing so after reading this poem.
If you have lost someone then i am so sorry and hope that your wounds and pain will heal and that you may find happiness again.:)

]]> By: sosta http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php/comment-page-1#comment-2839 sosta Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:01:35 +0000 http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php#comment-2839 That was touching...Beautiful. Your poem needs to flow more. But I love it! That was touching…Beautiful. Your poem needs to flow more. But I love it!

]]> By: Diamond.....1 M/C ~*~* http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php/comment-page-1#comment-2840 Diamond.....1 M/C ~*~* Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:01:35 +0000 http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php#comment-2840 Thats a really good poem I like it alot! seems like you really must love somebody in order to come up with that! Good job:) Thats a really good poem I like it alot! seems like you really must love somebody in order to come up with that! Good job:)

]]> By: :@) Simpily Harles http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php/comment-page-1#comment-2841 :@) Simpily Harles Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:01:35 +0000 http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php#comment-2841 So beautiful. I loved it. It coudl flow a little better but overall very touching. So beautiful. I loved it. It coudl flow a little better but overall very touching.

]]> By: Joy Xx http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php/comment-page-1#comment-2842 Joy Xx Sun, 22 Nov 2009 00:01:35 +0000 http://remedyfortinnitus.com/a-poem-i-wrote-about-love-and-loss-what-do-you-think.php#comment-2842 you obvioualy have a talent for poetry but it needs to be worked on. Lovely theme and lovely words but it doesnt always flow. You need to think about matching up the syllables of rhyming lines. In your first stanza...cannot sounds better at the end than cant :) you obvioualy have a talent for poetry but it needs to be worked on. Lovely theme and lovely words but it doesnt always flow. You need to think about matching up the syllables of rhyming lines. In your first stanza…cannot sounds better at the end than cant :)

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